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Cut scenes from Ch 9
So, I'm working away, though slowly, on Ch 9 of AMOC. I started and restarted three times before coming on a scene that felt right for the opening sequence, and it's 100% different than what's below. Here are the two previous openings, in all their unfleshed glory...
I've also realized I've done a bad job of communicating just who exactly is on this caravan trip. I've mentioned just a fraction of the people who I've been thinking were there, and as the journey chapters continue on into ch 9, I'm realizing I'll have to come to a decision. I can -
a)retcon previous chapters to more fully include all the characters,
b)revamp my own definition of just who was in this caravan to begin with, or
c)do nothing, and if they show up in the wedding ceremony later it might seem like they popped into existence.
Opinions are greatly appreciated!
Tags: amoc, cut scenes
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